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A picture springs to mind,
A scramble of pen and paper,
Quick before it is lost,
Particles falling,
Of this memory of mine,
Pushed by adrenaline,
I root through my drawers,
Quick a pen!
Reach it before it is gone.

Armed with this,
I crouch down low,
To spring upon an unsuspecting piece of paper,
That may have found its’ way below.

I search the surface of the floor,
My senses alert for a rustle,
Perhaps a patch of white,
Quick, I see it,
There lying on top of my chair.

It must be grabbed before the wind takes heed to my lair,
But alas it has,
The paper is swung into the air,
I spring into action,
Dancing along,
In a vain attempt to deceive the wind,
And snatch that piece of paper.

I twirl and whirl with a smile on my face,
Not forgetting its’ reason,
I fling myself at the paper,
Stuffing it into my pocket,
It must not escape!

A table! A table!
How had I forgotten?
In panic,
I rush around the room,
Had I not bought a table less than two years ago?



I pull out books,
Breaking many items,
Searching for a table.

I run across the room,
Finding only to be flung across a smooth surface,
Newspapers, cups, plates thrown to the side,
A table! A table!

Quick,
Get the chair,
Sit right down,
Hold onto the table,
Take the paper,
Put it straight down,
Next grab the pen,
Finally I was ready.

…but then I realised to my dismay,
I had quite forgotten the earlier thoughts of that day.
©2007-2009 ~German-Shamrock
:icongerman-shamrock:

Author's Comments

I wrote this (yet again) aaaaaaaaaaaaaaages ago. I hope you like it anyway. (oh and by drawers I mean chest of drawers.... Just in case there is any confusion!!)

This has happened to me too many times. I think of so many things to write but do I? no.... :(

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:iconbluefroggy67:
:heart: I love it. It is extremely easy both to picture, and to relate to! Oh, I hate not being able to find a pen/paper/solid surface before forgetting something great! And of course it's always something that you're sure would turn out well, too...
Great writing!! =D
:iconfrench-teapot:
Haha! Yay that was great! I hate it when that happens...
I think this one of your best poems! :clap: It's written really well! :heart:

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Reno: Mother schmother. It's Jenova's friggin' head.
Loz: HEY!
Yazoo: I will NOT have you refer to Mother that way!
Loz: You MEANIE!!
:heart::heart::heart:
Loz is my future husband.
Got it memorized?
:iconcha0tiqu3:
interesting and well-paced. it's a fav.

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Come on everybody, organised anarchy!
Self-promo
:icongerman-shamrock:
Haha, thanks. I'm just the voice of the ordinary/crazy person!! :)

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Dental hygiene is a must!!! :brushteeth:
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Man creates when he's bored.
:icongerman-shamrock:
Thanks! I'm glad you got the whole pace thing I was trying to create!

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Dental hygiene is a must!!! :brushteeth:
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Man creates when he's bored.
:icongerman-shamrock:
Thanks!!!! (will give you a thank-you hug tomorrow when I see you!!!)

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Dental hygiene is a must!!! :brushteeth:
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Man creates when he's bored.
:iconhviciprice:
This is funny in such a cruel way. I hate it when I have great ideas for writing and then lose them simply because I don't have something to write them on. You've captured the frenzy of the search for paper well!
:icongerman-shamrock:
Thanks! I'm through that at the moment. I['m getting inspired to write EVERYTHING but when I put pen to paper I can write NOTHING!!! :( It's getting really frustrating as this has been going on for nearly a month...)

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Dental hygiene is a must!!! :brushteeth:
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Man creates when he's bored.
:iconhviciprice:
Ah, the trials of being a writer...

When that happens to me, I literally begin forming the first sentences/lines in my head so that I'm not sitting down to the paper with an idea and an idea alone. Then, if nothing pours out of the pen immediately following that sentence, I leave it for a bit and go take a walk or something while I articulate the next sentence. Sometimes just seeing an empty space on the paper stresses me out, so it helps to get away from it, if only for five seconds.

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